What do you think about my first coordinate?

Hello everyone! This is my first time posting and I also recently just acquired my first lolita dress which also happens to be my number one dream dress.

BTSSB Disney's Snow White Ivory OP!

So my friend is a photographer and offered to take photos of me but I really want my coord to be nice so that when I post the photos online they look appealing.

Now presenting a lousy photoshop job I've done of all the items I was thinking I could use together.