choiceone_xxx (choiceone_xxx) wrote in egl,
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Feedback on a preliminary design please!!


Basically, it's a blouse, a faux-leather vest and a lolita-style skirt. I'm going for a Steampunk Lolita style, but I have a hard time getting a really lolita look to anything I design myself. This is the second version of this design. My first had long, poofy sleeves and a neck ruffle, closer to a victorian style than this. The skirt falls just past the knee (had to crop it due to the 400 px restriction).

I haven't designed the back yet - but any ideas for that would also be appreciated!

Input please?

EDIT: Thanks to everyone who commented!! I got some great ideas and will continue to work on this.
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