Miki (kitzune) wrote in egl,
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A question from a designer

I'm working on a potential design for a t-shirt and I wanted some opinions on how I could make it better. I'm hoping to submit it to threadless tees, and I tried getting some critique by posting it over there, but I generated almost no responses, which ... wasn't helpful. I ran this past carnet, and she said it was fine if I posted it to the list. So on that note, I'll put everything behind a cut.



Here is the design itself as it stands currently:



And here, I put it overtop one of the t-shirt templates on a color not black:




Tell me what you think. :) I really would like to make it the best it can be, so any help/advice/suggestions is honestly appreciated.

Thanks for your time!
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